WALT: show not tell
her lips are moving
her hands are ready to cry
her eyes are look both ways
her hands are moving so fast
her stomach has got butterflies
her feet are like a statue.
What I found hard was was thinking of what one to do on eyes
I found easy was putting the photo on this
what Emoems am I am sad.
I like this because it was fun witting in all of this
hi Sami I had a look at your work and I thought it was very good and interesting and amazing I thought that she was sad and that was how she felt .
ReplyDeleteYou did good of how you described her feelings I enjoyed looking at your blog.do you ever fell like that? . bye